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21 July 2006

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steph

That was without doubt, the best read I've had in a long while.
Awesome story. :)

mez

oh phil, you are brilliant! :) I loved reading that.

(also love "burning up" ha)

Dangerspouse

Damn. I wish I could describe heartfelt longing as well as you, instead of my one-note silliness. Bravo, man! And thanks for the note at my place - I'm flattered :)

WriteGirl

Thanks for the comment, without it I would never have gotten to read this.

Wow.

I think I'm a little in love with Bobby.

Kelly

That was fantastic, Flip. Aces.

Phil

Thanks Steph, I going to try and write some type of short story everyweek. It keeps me out of bars or chasing bad women.

Mez, you can claim credit for the burning up lyrics. After your post on iPod playlists I made a new 80s mix and was listening to it while writing.

DangerS: nobody threads a joke throughout a story like you do in your post. Your comedy gold mate.

I've been reading your journal for a while Writegirl from a link at cafrines. Glad you're on the ups!

Kel, my dear friend of all things weird and mythological - do you want to read more? I've worked out how this story ends.(not sure of the middle yet but Tom/Bobby needs to get the more shit kicked out of him before a resolution and maybe a few jokes about relationships)

Cafrine

Wow, Phil. That was brilliance.

jumblygiant

That was excellent. I wasn't sure what to expect (not that I was thinking it would be bad) and I certainly was not disappointed. you crafted that so well. loved it.

awittykitty

you captured the longing of a lost love really well.

Imelda

Phil - I loved it! Thank you.

Lauren

Ooooooh. Also -- this sounds like a fantastic idea, short story a week? We might just have to start a club (I mean I can't write worth a shit but my life is always movie moments).

Imelda

Phil, Check out this site and click on 'How To Play':

http://thescheherazadeproject.blogspot.com/

(Sorry, I'm being slack with HTML today).

Al

Nicely written Phil. I love your poetic description and your use of lyrics interspersed with the story. Very creative! Makes me want to finish up the next chapter of Greektown Butcher.

Phil

Thanks ya'll. I've got the next part worked out and finish it in a week or so.


Imelda:- interesting link. Ta!

AL: Yes your GB story has to continue!

Becka

I can't really say much because everyone else has said it, I guess that's what happens when you come in late..nice story :)

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